Great Expectations

Great Expectations

A Poem by Davidgeo
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unreasonable expectations of disappointment (the conundrum of true love)

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and i want you to be happy
more than life
and for you to be so happy
you must make me so sad
like something died
for real this time

© 2023 Davidgeo


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Wow. This is quite something. One person’s selfless love for another is also the cause of their own personal pain. A sad state of affairs. Felt the depth of loss here. Very nicely conveyed.

Great title.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

1 Year Ago

Sometimes loving someone too much or being loved by someone else too much or especially being in lov.. read more
The hollowness of loss is felt. You show the two-sided coin 🪙 so well the truth of it and the oain if it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

1 Year Ago

They say true love is hard work. I think the Greeks were dramatizing this with all their greatest l.. read more

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Added on March 25, 2023
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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