The Survival Rate Is Zero

The Survival Rate Is Zero

A Poem by Davidgeo
"

It comes when it has to... welcome to life

"
Like it happened
Just so it can Happen?
... again,
until it can't for reasons,
"indescribable"?

.... its why i do the drugs!
     called food....


to describe the reality...
(sans the f*****g tragedy)
No one real, here, is a hero

- signed -
Nature

rawr

consciousness
is more complicated....

who's really the fool?

the number or the calculator?

© 2023 Davidgeo


Author's Note

Davidgeo
It's hard to be a certain kind of animal.



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A thought provoking piece. Life is about survival. We all deal with it in our own way and that can be a struggle at times.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


I enjoyed reading this. Even though it was a short poem, you made a great impact with your words. I look forward to reading more of your writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Your words described one’s life so truest. It’s just some instances in life are unpredictable and sometimes unanswerable . I hope I got the right point . Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


The tight wire suddenly gone slack then taut again with such a snap as to contort and mangle what fragile ecosystem exists in this tenuous emotional bandwidth, over and over until being over is over with. Survival seems not an option.

Posted 1 Year Ago


The tight wire suddenly gone slack then taut again with such a snap as to contort and mangle what fragile ecosystem exists in this tenuous emotional bandwidth, over and over until being over is over with. Survival seems not an option.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on January 27, 2023
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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