Hurts

Hurts

A Poem by Davidgeo
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the world it's burning
i've seen it 
you don't want it

An argument can turn into
Ashes

If you listen to idols....

The world might be ending,
but...
acceleration is for cars
We're just a******s
It always ends well....

(if you die...

    before the ending
you'll forget (never fret)

it gets worse

© 2022 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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Love your choice of music. Bobby Darin had a great voice and that cat of yours looks pretty sprightly, but these lines aren’t uplifting are they? There are hurts here. Your final line is full of doom.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

1 Year Ago

I'm not sure what I'd do without you here chris.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Ha! You would manage admirably believe me :)
"Acceleration is for cars" love this line

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

1 Year Ago

Thanks doll face. have another one... "heat is not temperature"
A fine muse expressed swell, i like your word choice. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.


Posted 1 Year Ago


Sound like an endless cycle of hurts and disappointed hopes.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on November 21, 2022
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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