One Day At a Time

there are words you cannot see

hidden in paragraph

one sentence at a time

arousing

what everyone forgets

that they forgot

it comes

it goes

but i will see you

if you look for me

as a word you never learned

Author's Note

Reviews

[Susan 🦋]

Everyone, at times, feels invisible. True self hidden as missed words or meaning within a paragraph. Those who really look, often find a hidden gem. Hopefully :-) Interesting piece. Certainly, thought provoking. Well done.

[Carola]

i don't really understand the theme of your poem, but I like the lady singing. she has a nice voice.
cheerio carola

[Dennis Wolf]

So what you're getting at is that... 'unknowable I' behind the front of your works... Well, I suppose 'unknowable' isn't exactly the correct description, but you get the idea.


Word art is... In some ways like music. Not everyone walks away with the same experience, and not everyone listens at the right time, in the right state of mind. A lot of readers are actually never in the correct state of mind, because they want to consume 'art' the same way they mindlessly consume 'information' from their phone screens.


It was an interesting word play here.
Cheers

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

The message behind the art where we as the creator dwell. I often say that if one reads my work they will see behind the words who I am. An enlightened piece of poetry David.

[Davidgeo]

One of the greatest features of language, of any kind, is its ability to convey more than it shows. It's one of mankinds greatest contributions to the world. Organized expression. It describes the chaos.

[Donna]

This is very interesting! I like it a lot! Nice job! 😊

[Green]

This is captivating. I find myself reading it again and again, trying to decipher what exactly I think it means. Thank you for sharing

[Davidgeo]

oooh my dear that is high praise.