I love you too

Forever is a long time

A very large number of short years

if everything dies before the end

then nothing knows if and or when

      the air, it's in the water

the language, it's in the medicine

The people we are in the garbage

the love its in the sunlight

its in the dirt, its in the trash

it is the food

I love you too

Author's Note

Reviews

[KWP]

I love you too :)

how long is forever in the heart that only knows eternal bliss - in the heart that keeps beating long after the flesh has rotted in the ground to sprout some other living breathing being - leaving the heart to beat on alone and waiting for you?

[Davidgeo]

ooooh I love to be to be loved.

But I'm a crazy person so my choices are generally not reliable even when they seem to make sense.

Most people are crazy if you know them well enough.

All people, actually, are batshit insane if you know them well enough. All people. Every single one.

[Chris Shaw]

We enter this world with nothing, we leave with nothing, but we can leave some love behind on our departure. A little love can go a long way. That's how your words came across to me. Credence Ckearwater, great music.

Chris

[Davidgeo]

I don't think leaving a stain is always bad.

Thanks for the love doll face.
Not all of us love each other.

[Ken e Bujold]

a very interesting read her TK. Great rendering of the idea of eternity as short passages, bytes if you will. followed by lovely lines counter pointing each other to finish that can be read as a kiss off or a great warm slippery embrace. Personally I opted for the later, being a romantic at heart

ken