Moons

Penelope

the wife of Odysseus

a scar upon titan

the largest of all satellites 

we thought

the queen of Ithaca

the daughter of Icarus

was unmatched 

until we measured

all the gods upon our sky

before the stars

that we could see

saying plain

there is no question

you have answers to

  our flaws... 

there is only light

painting rocks

in the very, very dark

a war against our time

between a purpose

beyond our time

and your eternity

where nothing

becomes everything

just a scar upon rocks

flawed

closer, to god

Author's Note

Reviews

[R.J Calzonetti (Siniste..]

I really enjoyed this work, thanks for sharing. I sometimes struggle to pick out parts of a poem and review things from a critical standpoint, I can't pick out particular elements that I could tell you you mastered, or fell short on, but I can tell you I enjoyed the work. It felt quite different from your usual works for some reason, but certainly not in a bad way. It felt fresh, new and interesting. Keep it up.