Ethereal

Ethereal

A Poem by Davidgeo
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On the edge of the nightmare
Like the blade of a knife
You might see a dream
Before you awoke
Into shame 
Into Desire
Maybe Peace 
Perhaps War
Love or
Disaster
And on the edge of a dream
You might see a nightmare
After you fell deeply
 asleep
Into chaos
Manic insanity
A complex 
regression of X
Fantasy based Y 
Vanity tinged
stained Humanity
Absently taken
Deeply
Into a reality
 please
says,
The boundaries of flesh
 thank you
I miss you
Come back to me
Whole or,
In pieces
Come back

© 2022 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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I like this one. Flow, word choice...
Good s**t.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's an interesting title you picked for this poem and journey through your words. The poem is well penned. I enjoyed the read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Come back? No thanks, won't be coming back.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

CLR9

2 Years Ago

Goddamn right it is, you half dollar jive a*s turkey.
Davidgeo

2 Years Ago

(i love you, every part of you)
Davidgeo

2 Years Ago

I'm just glad you went out of your way to talk to me.
I think we wake up to what we sleep with. That seems very logical, inevitable. The concluding lines are powerful. I enjoyed this poem, DavD.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

2 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed this.

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Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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