In a Good Way

In a Good Way

A Poem by Davidgeo
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Death my friends
It is certain
Life they say
It is not
So heavy metal
Or soft jazz
Classical baby
What's the difference?
Play it hard
Hit the strings
Until your fingers
Dig through 
   (and)Bleed
Make it right
   Make it sound
How it is you , f*****g
sound
Paint the world
destroy your canvas

With what you call
  your god damned music
Embrace the surface

Show your flavor
Show your flesh
Show your purpose
Show your 
  world
This is not a game
not until,
not Until you play it
This is clearly serious

© 2022 Davidgeo


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It's OK to be mad. Shows that you are using all the emotions and you are alive.There are many references to. music in this piece. Music is a mood changer. I like variety in mine. Classical compositions can touch the soul. Can elevate the spirit. I need that. Elgar and Vaughan Williams do that. British composers. I'm proud of my heritage.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

2 Years Ago

I was always more of a fan of Frederic Chopin. I love a good solo piano piece. But for the British.. read more


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Good morning from beautiful Spain..
Enjoyed the read although it did sound angry.. I just read the review Chris gave you and your response..funny because I just finished practicing a new Chopin piece.. I only play classical music..
Started playing piano when I was 50!! Now I am nearly 74...I do listen to other music..
I have an amazing teacher and take lessons every week. Your reference to music and poetry was great..

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's OK to be mad. Shows that you are using all the emotions and you are alive.There are many references to. music in this piece. Music is a mood changer. I like variety in mine. Classical compositions can touch the soul. Can elevate the spirit. I need that. Elgar and Vaughan Williams do that. British composers. I'm proud of my heritage.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

2 Years Ago

I was always more of a fan of Frederic Chopin. I love a good solo piano piece. But for the British.. read more
I can relate to the intensity, the creative, destructive force that sometimes bubbles up from the depths of one's soul. It's an ideal, maybe a remnant of an ancient freedom we once had.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great piece, I have some experience with spoken word poetry, and I feel like you captured the essence of it extremely well. Powerful words, poetic message. Thanks for sharing, keep writing, and I’ll keep reading.

R.J

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

2 Years Ago

If you keep reading I might kill you with all my pretentiousness.
R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)

2 Years Ago

Ha, not yet I think. I see it more as skill than being pretentious. You have a good sense of humour .. read more

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Added on January 14, 2022
Last Updated on January 16, 2022

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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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