The Last Time I Left a Comment

you a******s kicked me off the site

No offense,

I'd love to comment on the things I read here but....

The last profile I lost had over 300+ poems/stories.  I'm not interested in losing another profile....  again, no offense.

A******s

Reviews

[R.J Calzonetti (Siniste..]

That actually happened, huh? Seems pretty unfair for simply having your own honest opinions on someone's work. Even if it is negative, a review is a way to improve. Positive improvement is guided by honesty, not simply saying something is good without pointing out possible flaws.

[Davidgeo]

It happened a long time ago, it wasn't really "the last time I left a comment".... but, yeah, that happened. Not for no reason, I used leave all kinds of fucked up comments meant specifically to start s**t between people. A lot of those people have left the site though so I thought make sure people knew. I'm not so cunty now, I'd like to comment on people's work more but, I'm afraid it won't end well. And the next time it doesn't go well I'm pretty sure Charlie has no tolerance for me and I'd get deleted immediately. Like your work, I'd review you more especially because I think you don't get enough reviews but... I kinda walk on eggshells when I review now because of the last time. It sucks losing everything at once, I only copy and save the rough drafts.

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

I see, it really sucks to lose your work, I've had that happen for me to some small degree. Sorry that happened.

[Davidgeo]

Don't be sorry. I'm going to do it again. In the near future.

Thank you though. You've always been generous with me, you're an objectively kind person. Wether you do that on purpose or you're just good at playing a character, I have a lot respect for you.

I didn't expect any reviews on this.

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

Thanks man, that means a lot to me. I'm also quite thankful to you, because you gave me some confidence in my work. Much respect.

[Davidgeo]

We should collaborate. Especially because our writing styles are so different. Nobody wants to collaborate with me on this site.... which is a shame because I have no shame when it comes to things like that making me incredibly easy to work with.

[Davidgeo]

Oh yeah... (reference the title of this poem).... I remember now why people don't want to collaborate with me... hahahhahah whoops

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

I don't collab with anyone anymore, the person I used to collab with and I had a falling out, and I just feel like I have far more freedom working alone. If I ever get back into it I'll let you know though.

[Davidgeo]

I think, we should do a one off.

I'm not going to lie, I mostly want to do this because I want to add things to my wheelhouse and you seem like someone I could convince into that kind of mess. I'm trying to rip you off without actually ripping you off.

I'm sorry. I'm a terrible person.

[Davidgeo]

My style has become kinda stale and repetitive. Working with other people is like steroids for writing muscles when done properly

[Davidgeo]

.... you'll benefit... I'm actually really effective in close interpersonal environments. Everybody wins in those situations.

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

I’ll give it a try then, maybe we could do 16 stanzas and take turns writing? Up to you though, I want you to be comfortable with how we do this, that generally determines the quality of a collab in my opinion.

[Davidgeo]

16 stanza's.... okay. I know I basically just write short things but being organized before your execute is very important to me. We need a topic, we need a reason to address the topic, and we need a pace that, doesn't have to be uniform but it has to flow.

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

I'm unsure of what we should make our topic, have any ideas? Maybe we can continue this in private messages. I think that the pace should be a certain number of lines with a similar amount of words each line consisting of one stanza. We could maybe make a document that the two of us could edit, and we could work on it from there. I like the topic of duality, which is something I cover a lot, but honestly it's quite vague. I feel like we need something more than that.

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

oh, and maybe a stanza from each of us at least once for 12 hours.

[Davidgeo]

How, viscous, taboo, brutal, etc... do you wanna get?

There is nothing that won't shock me. If you feel it PM worthy by all means. Lets get into it.

There is one rule though. You're not allowed to be offended unless you can objectively prove why legalistically .

(when I write, I usually play in the dirt... but it's intellectual dirt, mostly)

[Davidgeo]

How about... the purpose of Zero? The "number" zero I mean.

[Davidgeo]

Or.... the "maximum" temperature.... or

lets' get away from math... "Why do I pet my Cat" (alright that was kind of joke... but...

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

hmm, none of that is sticking out to me as something I'm that knowledgeable in. I'm going to search the internet and see if somethings comes up. Keep the ideas flowing, I'm sure we'll think of something.

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

how about finite and infinity?

[Davidgeo]

Lets get away from math but keep the same theme..... how about, why do we end and why do we save, lives.

[Davidgeo]

Have you ever seen a movie called Brazil?

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

No I haven't. What's it about?

[Davidgeo]

It's a dark comedy about the excesses of bureaucracy.

You could also call it a sci fi film but, only in a very abstract sense (and it's already abstract) . It's a strange, but, one of the better films made on it's topic.

I think you should just watch it. It's something you'll be glad you witnessed regardless.

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

I might check it out at some point, thanks for the suggestion.

[Davidgeo]

You'll recognize this film as you watch it. The Matrix owes heavily, heavily to this movie.Jacob's Ladder, Fargo, Gattaca... the list is endless. Pretty much any movie that satirizes bureaucracy comes from this movie and... and another movie, a really old movie, one of the first movies ever made in fact, called "Metropolis" . I highly recommend both these movies, they are, they were made when movies were still trying to show people serious concepts in the real live world.

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

I'll see if I can find them somewhere and check them out hopefully eventually. I loved The Matrix, and I really wanted to the see the reboot for it as well, do you know if it's out?

[Davidgeo]

It's not out yet... February I think but they keep f*****g with the date so, you're guess is not worse than mine. But's it's finished, in post production and coming out sooner than later... that much is known.

If you're a Matrix fan, watch both those movies. Brazil is from the 80's but not really a conventional film, it's, it's easier if you just watch it for yourself... Metropolis is from the 1920's and, well, a movie from the late 1920's, no sound, weird cast, weird camera work weird everything (because it's the first time they ever did those things) But as you watch it you'll see why I recommended it to you.

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

Definitely will check it out, sounds interesting.

[Patricia]

Wow, well that’s not good! Constructive criticism is always welcome on my page but of course I’m my own worst critic, it’s all shiite if ya ask me. Sorry to hear this. Well I hope it gets better, you can call my stuff any name ya want and I promise I won’t get mad ;)

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Sorry to hear this happened to you and I honestly had no idea that could even be possible. I know I had experienced a few blocking me from commenting on their work perhaps because I wasn't being critical. But this is a bit odd to lose your account for critique. Most critiques I have read have been informative, helpful, and encouraging. JayG being a prolific critic and quite honestly insightful in his comments. Writers must learn to better accept criticism and not feel it is too judgemental because in all honesty art is subjective. People are going to love what they love while others may not. It does not lessen the value of your art. Even if critical someone took the time to comment on the work in hopes of encouraging the writer. We can choose to accept the criticism or not, but if it isn't done from malicious intent just send a simple thank you and move on. We shouldn't be thin skinned enough to take offense to a critique that is simply trying to be helpful. I'm sorry to hear you have gone through losing an account over something so petty.

[Gee]

Well, you know what I think, you're welcome anytime on my page, at least you give an honest opinion, sometimes to honest for some folk.
Guess you'll always be judged on what went before though.
Take care

[Davidgeo]

It's funny, I just left you a short review right before I read this review.

I deserve the scarlet letter, I've been a real piece of s**t over the years. I'm guilty of high class manipulation and extra low class s**t posting. And I'm about to do it again (not the manipulation part, I'll keep my socio/psycho skills on the shelf this time).

I'd love to leave you an assholic d bag review but, you're too good at what you do. It's difficult to find real fault with your writing.

I suppose if I really try.... but.... that's not as fun for anybody.

I think all three (RJ) of us in this comment section should collaborate on, something. The variance in how we write is, varied, to say the least. That usually makes for a good end product.... just sayin...

[Gee]

It would be I interesting to see what the pair of you come up with but think I'd struggle to add anything worth reading. I write little, read even less and have never tried to write "to order"
Thanks for the compliment above, coming from you it's appreciated more than it would be from many.
Cheers

[Davidgeo]

That, is a bunch of horse s**t. I've been reading you since 2015. I know what you're capable of.

Look man, I can't really steal from your writing style until we work together. And I promise, it'll be, relatively short.

I'm divorced and my only child refuses to talk to me... and I'm pretty sure RJ is single... your perspective is, would be, fundamental.

Look at the non sense I write about these days... clearly i'm running out of ideas.

[Davidgeo]

(and think of a magic we could create.... it would be interesting if nothing else....)
read more(and think of a magic we could create.... it would be interesting if nothing else....)

I get to pick the music.

[Gee]

Horse s**t, LMAO
I wish I could see what you see when reading my posts :)