Cowboys On Acid

Some people are rich without money... some people are dead without dying

here is here

there is where

we don't know

but We can guess

so, tell me a story

write me a rhyme

tell me a why

how we've lost the time

explain to me

your shade of light

let me 

please know

how you spell unique

inside your name

all alone

amongst the crowd

tell me how

you traverse the dark

please for me

my darling dear

why there is there

why life needs death

show me close

how spread apart

things are things

why taste is taste

how delicious is,

please delicious please

i can only know

what you choose to show me

we can only know

what we were built to see

so life's a gas

and we evaporate

into the end's

    a thing

we pretend

so,life lives forever

call it flesh tv

aka a lack of secrets

vagina's un incognito

dicks on display

human's

f*****g each other

unashamed

for our son's

 for our daughter's

 life gets dirty,

or things go dark

Author's Note

It depends HoW you do porn, kinda.... (yeah, so I do it weird... are you really that surprised?;)


Come with me.... if you can....

Reviews

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

A raw and visceral truth. It may be bleak but it sure is honest and I respect that. Life is dirty and a lot of struggle for most people who don't have much. This speaks to a generation of those living under these circumstances. I lie this poem nice work.

[Davidgeo]

This really is just about porn and being a porn "star".

The girls name in the photo is "Molly Jane".

[Davidgeo]

.... She's better than just awesome. Also, she's good at starring/directing/"writing" in, interesting, porn.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

At first she kind of looked like a cousin of mine and I had to take a better look with another pair of glasses. And I was struggling to figure out why she looked familiar. My bad. Forget what I said I still like the poem though. It really feels raw...I say that facetiously of course.

[Davidgeo]

The reason she looks familiar is because she's kinda like the "Chris Pratt" of porn stars... so, you've masturbated to her before. Not to be creepy or weird I'm just sayin, you've jerked off to that woman before I guarantee it.

[Davidgeo]

Molly Jane is... a hall of famer.

[AmandaRios]

Love the line work, language and imagery.

let me
please know
how you spell unique

inside your name

Love it!

[Davidgeo]

Thanks.

And you spell, in this case, it's all about style. The alphabet is, not fixed. Not for this game anyway.

[Davidgeo]

(no one gets out alive so, I say, spell how ever you'd like)

I know that's not really what you asked but, I felt like saying it anyway.

[AmandaRios]

Glad you did. Your language is beautiful. Keep up the great work!

[Davidgeo]

look closer