Eloquence

this is not poetry

soft to the touch

devastating the penetration

it hurts, it hurts so bad...

how irrelevant

that movie meant to me

how important

nothing means to me

I can see 

what makes me bleed

without blood 

such is writing

such is art

(without picture)

I just like the hobby

(and i love your face)

do you really wanna get weird?

I forgot to rhyme

Please listen to the music.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

It seems to me that you are enjoying writing poetry, but rather you would like listening to music or having a tryst with you lover....It's not too clear, but I like the writing.
Best,
Betty

[Davidgeo]

It seems to me you, know more about me than I know about myself. Well done. Outstanding review, truly.

[Davidgeo]

(i still hope you listened to the music..)

[Davidgeo]

(i'll do better next time, promise)

[Betty Hermelee]

I thought your poem was great! And I did listen to ,
music;
Best, Betty

[Davidgeo]

Isn't she phenomenal? Two maybe three or four, on the entire planet, are as good as she is at playing this kind of music. The entire planet. I love Valentina.... She is perfect.

If you're looking for classical though... we'll have to talk about that.

[Davidgeo]

(LONG classical i meant to say... 40+ minutes)