Nuka Flakes

Nuka Flakes

A Poem by Davidgeo
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"
for no reason,
we pretend the reason

an expression without,
emotion...

fearless 
sometimes I say...
"I Love You"
from a place
I can't describe...

The human is just a suit
The emotion is just...

I love your eyes,
  can you tell me.... why I f*****g cry?


In time my baby doll face 
Were gonna find out...
  Eventually, not just you and me but,,,


I hope I see you there,
in the end
when it ends...

I hope you make it there.
just to see, what does not matter

I apologize with violence
....  this will get,

Let's see how this ends.

© 2021 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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Much positive emotion until......

I apologise with violence

Such a contrast there and it raises questions to the reader. Why apologise with violence?

Your posted image reminded me of school maths. BODMAS. A reminder of how to tackle equations.

Chris



Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

3 Years Ago

This was a good poem until the second half. I totally botched it. Thank you for stopping by. I wi.. read more



Reviews

Much positive emotion until......

I apologise with violence

Such a contrast there and it raises questions to the reader. Why apologise with violence?

Your posted image reminded me of school maths. BODMAS. A reminder of how to tackle equations.

Chris



Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

3 Years Ago

This was a good poem until the second half. I totally botched it. Thank you for stopping by. I wi.. read more
Interesting poem, I'm not sure quite what it's about, but I know there's emotion in it, and I enjoyed it for its blunt honesty. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

3 Years Ago

I forgot what it means anyway,

Thanks for reviewing.

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Added on November 8, 2021
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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