Smooth Lips

Smooth Lips

A Poem by Davidgeo
"

meow

"
i live where you can;t
for a living
you couldn't
(pay rent)
even if you tried
here
it burns your nostrils
singes your fingertips
distorts your mind
into a game
from a real place
twisted beautiful
living perfect
 extra broken
sunshine activated

© 2021 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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Your world is too hot. I have never been good with the heat. I like a cool climate where I can think clearly. Too much sun spoils everything. It can be a killer. It's, all about balance. I didn't like see saws as a kid unless I was directly facing the person on the other side on their level. Your poems make my mind drift.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

3 Years Ago

It's important not to have a world, in this world.

We should go golfing sometime



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Your world is too hot. I have never been good with the heat. I like a cool climate where I can think clearly. Too much sun spoils everything. It can be a killer. It's, all about balance. I didn't like see saws as a kid unless I was directly facing the person on the other side on their level. Your poems make my mind drift.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

3 Years Ago

It's important not to have a world, in this world.

We should go golfing sometime

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Added on August 26, 2021
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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