Your world is too hot. I have never been good with the heat. I like a cool climate where I can think clearly. Too much sun spoils everything. It can be a killer. It's, all about balance. I didn't like see saws as a kid unless I was directly facing the person on the other side on their level. Your poems make my mind drift.
Chris
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
It's important not to have a world, in this world.
Your world is too hot. I have never been good with the heat. I like a cool climate where I can think clearly. Too much sun spoils everything. It can be a killer. It's, all about balance. I didn't like see saws as a kid unless I was directly facing the person on the other side on their level. Your poems make my mind drift.
Chris
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
It's important not to have a world, in this world.