Simply Human Human Simply

Simply Human Human Simply

A Poem by Davidgeo
"

an experiment.... I'm bad at rhyming. I know this.

"
Simply simple
simply dangerous
simply simply
Human purpose
.
Nearly clearly
nearly dearly
nearly close to us
Human versus
.
Clearly merely
clearly purely
clearly dear to me
Human service
.
Sometimes wordless
Sometimes purchased
Sometimes curtains
Human persons
.
Breathing life
Beneath a knife
Wreathed in flesh
Time refreshed
Living death
Death to life
Life to death
.
A human experience 
Made for you
Made by you
Just for you
Some human deliverance 
The art of life
She speaks for eons
....but not forever
Never forever

© 2021 Davidgeo


Author's Note

Davidgeo

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Good poetry, I am finding is multi layered and can have so many enigmatic questions put upon the reader. It is made to challenge and seek to open dialogue within. Asking hard existential questions of us, whether in rhyme or not. There are times I believe a writer doesn't always see the multifaceted things their creation speaks to. I enjoyed reading this work of yours, Dave. It is a puzzle worth opening. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

3 Years Ago

Many layers. If it makes you ask questions, I've done well. It's not important what I actually mea.. read more
Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

3 Years Ago

Exactly. It's your words that inspire that, Dave. That's all we can ever ask for as artists.



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Good poetry, I am finding is multi layered and can have so many enigmatic questions put upon the reader. It is made to challenge and seek to open dialogue within. Asking hard existential questions of us, whether in rhyme or not. There are times I believe a writer doesn't always see the multifaceted things their creation speaks to. I enjoyed reading this work of yours, Dave. It is a puzzle worth opening. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

3 Years Ago

Many layers. If it makes you ask questions, I've done well. It's not important what I actually mea.. read more
Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

3 Years Ago

Exactly. It's your words that inspire that, Dave. That's all we can ever ask for as artists.

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Johnsburg, IL



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