Problems To Solutions For Problems For Solutions

a riddle of existence (just for one day)

time is more real

to those who feel

far beyond the ego ideal

the hidden, concealed 

behind their surreal

into their true steel

for them, for those people

there is more to reveal

within their time in this space

in this place from these things

from these people

in their time there is always

always

every time more there

is    to Feel

it's that the pain

inherent in the existence

the only problem, is that pain

inherent in that existence

is it's own and only solution

every time

it's that the fact

without the problem

exists no solution

it's that.....

it is always in time always

 inevitable 

without an end

we can have no beginning

to start from

there is no path

until we make one

Author's Note

Reviews

[Sir Aphid]

seems legit. i live my life in the context of limited time. it gives more meaning to what i do. if time was infinite, life would be considerably different. it would change the very humanity of my existence. pain is similar. it provides contrast. it's not sought out but still somehow essential.

'their is more to reveal' did you mean 'there is more to reveal*'? or 'theirs is more to reveal'? or am i missing something?

nice poem.

[Davidgeo]

Thanks for that. Your corrections are extremely appreciated.

[Davidgeo]

.... you made this a better poem, and not just because of the basic corrections. Well done.

[KWP]

and I ask myself what the heck is this funny path that I have started and why oh why when the trajectories come they first of all derail me for long enough to know I have been knocked off my feet but not long enough to know that in this life, there is this life and in this life we must keep going - extremities are good I feel - in any direction - we have the opportunity to learn in extremities - we have the opportunity for pain or elation and then we have the opportunity to be derailed once again to start the cycle afresh - being transient certainly helps in these situations I feel. Knowing that time is only a perception is a whole other realm I am sure you can fill me in on quite articulately too :D

HI!

[Davidgeo]

I truly wish you and I could talk about this in person. You are precious to me in a way this site cant really quantify. You are precious to me Liz.

[KWP]

I get it ...

[Chris Shaw]

If you don't experience pain, then you won't appreciate pleasure. Some people do not experience the depth of feelings that others do. In other words they are not sensitive to their emotions. Some people have a thick skin and feel nothing.

Chris

[Davidgeo]

True feeling comes from a place where thick skin is irrelevant. I don't trust people who don't at least somewhat understand this fact.

[Poetic Beauty]

Some people feel emotion deeper and stronger than most.

[Davidgeo]

Some people think that's a better thing than other's. Some people feel too much, some people feel to little. The middle ground is, elusive I think.