Something

Something

A Poem by Davidgeo
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anything
i can teach you 
everything
so follow me
 willing great hazard
do it now
 show me your vigor
paint the sky with your purpose
 your intuition
let us find things
 pressed firm against rock
to the sky
to the bottoms of the oceans
like it was skin
stretched long
against the earth like it's flesh
 sans atmosphere 
in front of...

nothing

like a series of broken
 sentences

before the doll face
until we both really showed up
naked and alone
faced with deadalus
an end
The end,
so show me

show me that thing 

show me how to teach us
everything
regardless of anything
so take us
as something different
so teach me
like i am nothing
like purpose is a trade
teach me
anything

© 2021 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo
This is the best version of this song.


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hmmm purpose is a trade - yeah interesting

I like what you wrote below about the having to know yourself fully from the inside first and formost - oh god yes everything externally is a mirror. This though - this statement does not seem very mathematical - are you coming over to the Hippie Chick side of things - or, are you about to roll another spliff and explain?

Life is just fine my side ...

Posted 3 Years Ago


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A life time is not enough to interpete different aspect of everything. Showing or walking on an obvious path is not a solution, so effort is the key to discovery. And interest in knowing the unknown can be tricky but rewarding

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

That whole trying to know the unknown thing can also be lonely. A delayed gratification type of sce.. read more

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