I disgust us

I disgust us

A Poem by Davidgeo
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reach
with a very broken hand
and a simply destroyed life
put forth, extreme, f*****g effort
and so it goes,
so here we are,
we show ourselves
what it costs
  all the things we pay
to break into pieces 
then repair everything
just for sport
just because
we have nothing to do
and we wanted to see what it costs
where everyone's broke
with nothing to do

i just wanted to know
 the price
and the cost

where it hurts
the reason...

everything is stupid.

© 2020 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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I really abhor that kind of day, constant questioning, never any good answers. Sounds as though you're not in a good mindset, that's what poetry is for.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

Don't make a habit of predicting other people's mindset. There's a really good chance you have no i.. read more
Sybil J.

4 Years Ago

Sorry, you're right, I'm new to this. I didn't know there were rules for reviewing.
Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

There are no rules.... you can tell me to f**k off if you think you're right, I'll respect that. I .. read more
I think it's normal to want to know things, even when you know the knowing could consume you. Because the more you know the more you want to know. "You" doesn't mean you specifically. I'm generalizing

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

There is a reason everything get's kinda stupid en masse every once in a while. It's not even a com.. read more

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Added on August 18, 2020
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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