Vicious Math

Vicious Math

A Poem by Davidgeo
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If you give me a gun
eventually
I will never not look for targets

I do wish we kept our claws...
across time
It would've stayed a fair fight
amongst animal's

But then, 

There wouldn't be space flight

I would never know what Ceres looks like

We'd all be stuck,

in the mud

Wondering why 
blinking lights

Across the sky

Define time

© 2020 Davidgeo


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It's an interesting argument - the Australian Aboriginals have been here for 40,000 - 80,000 years before white many came believing they knew better than the "savages" fact is the aboriginals (across the planet) were able to 'tap in' to the universe in ways we may never even comprehend. White man started thinking hard, some, what was it 500 years pre Socrates, and when they did they set the trajectory - who the heck said that trajectory was right? The aboriginals lived in harmony with the earth and their innate knowledge handed down and down and down thought generations - in this reality right now, I say we all live in a tangled mess of theory, experiement and idoicy.

Of course it is currently the nature of humans to want to go beyond the current knowledge, and is there anything wrong with that? I'm not sure if we can answer honestly until we truly understand what it means to live in harmony with the everywhen - only then we can see how the two very different playing fields may be levelled.

Probably way left field here, but I have often contemplated this very thought.



Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

I'm of the belief that "modern" civilization existed more than once (the sphinx head used to be a li.. read more
KWP

4 Years Ago

it gets pretty windy up there. People fall down and die. :)
Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

That's a significant portion of the fun.



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It's an interesting argument - the Australian Aboriginals have been here for 40,000 - 80,000 years before white many came believing they knew better than the "savages" fact is the aboriginals (across the planet) were able to 'tap in' to the universe in ways we may never even comprehend. White man started thinking hard, some, what was it 500 years pre Socrates, and when they did they set the trajectory - who the heck said that trajectory was right? The aboriginals lived in harmony with the earth and their innate knowledge handed down and down and down thought generations - in this reality right now, I say we all live in a tangled mess of theory, experiement and idoicy.

Of course it is currently the nature of humans to want to go beyond the current knowledge, and is there anything wrong with that? I'm not sure if we can answer honestly until we truly understand what it means to live in harmony with the everywhen - only then we can see how the two very different playing fields may be levelled.

Probably way left field here, but I have often contemplated this very thought.



Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

I'm of the belief that "modern" civilization existed more than once (the sphinx head used to be a li.. read more
KWP

4 Years Ago

it gets pretty windy up there. People fall down and die. :)
Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

That's a significant portion of the fun.
Your opening supports my earlier statement about peace being unattainable.
Human nature craves conflict. We want to fight for something.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

Either we overcome our base drives or we eventually get consumed by them. There is no room for the .. read more
Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

(what I'm trying to say is that... we can make such beautiful things but, everything is always conde.. read more

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