Never Promise

Never Promise

A Poem by Davidgeo
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the benefits of mental breakdown's
have things in common
with multiple language
they say i'm good
at playing games
in various ways
they say you...

you...
enjoy the benefits of mental breakdown's
and all the other things
that have things in common 

I hope 

  this reads poorly
very poorly
 to you, my dear

© 2020 Davidgeo


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Sounds like some strange symbiotic relationship in which one feeds off the other.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

We pretty much always feed of one another. For better or worse, one way or another. We only exist.. read more
Different. I enjoyed this.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

… I know this makes me a d********g. I am aware of that.
light and ashes

4 Years Ago

It's your work. What I'm saying is....it seems to be unappreciated like it is..but it's your call.
Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

fair enough.
where you going with this one?

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KWP

4 Years Ago

you see through the guise ... ahhh ...
Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

I know, more or less, what you are. A bad a*s mo fo, hands down.... or do you wanna pretend othe.. read more
KWP

4 Years Ago

no comment

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Added on May 31, 2020
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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