Rubie Goldberg

Rubie Goldberg

A Poem by Davidgeo
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Rube Goldberg machine - a machine designed to perform a simple task in a very complicated way. aka "created to be made redundant"

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turning trash into treasure
turn your garbage into resource
impose order onto chaos
civilize your wilderness
/
turning treasure into trash
decaying resource into garbage
bringing chaos to the order
make wild your society
/

repeat upon repeat

© 2020 Davidgeo


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I really like this one, the quatrain structure of it and the allegory of a self deprecating machine - though I'm inclined to debate a couple of points:

I've always felt that society (or civilization even) was more a yoke upon which which we domesticate the wild of those within it (i.e. the social contract). And whenever I've stepped into wilderness, it felt like I was just relieving myself of the harness that had otherwise imposed civility (meaning that rather than civilize the wild, I let the wild relieve me of the constraints found in civilization). I also feel as though domesticating the wild is an innately hubristic (or even human) thing, and have always been drawn more to the idea that the wild should be made to adopt us, rather than us to tame it.

I'm curious as to your thoughts on that, and am open to talking it out if you're in disagreement



Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

For as well respected and acknowledged that Anthony Hopkins already is, I still think he's an underr.. read more
Ookpik

4 Years Ago

I'd definitely agree, though I've always considered him one of the greats - and I haven't seen the t.. read more
Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

I think you will really enjoy the third season for the most part. Nothing is really going to top th.. read more



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I really like this one, the quatrain structure of it and the allegory of a self deprecating machine - though I'm inclined to debate a couple of points:

I've always felt that society (or civilization even) was more a yoke upon which which we domesticate the wild of those within it (i.e. the social contract). And whenever I've stepped into wilderness, it felt like I was just relieving myself of the harness that had otherwise imposed civility (meaning that rather than civilize the wild, I let the wild relieve me of the constraints found in civilization). I also feel as though domesticating the wild is an innately hubristic (or even human) thing, and have always been drawn more to the idea that the wild should be made to adopt us, rather than us to tame it.

I'm curious as to your thoughts on that, and am open to talking it out if you're in disagreement



Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

For as well respected and acknowledged that Anthony Hopkins already is, I still think he's an underr.. read more
Ookpik

4 Years Ago

I'd definitely agree, though I've always considered him one of the greats - and I haven't seen the t.. read more
Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

I think you will really enjoy the third season for the most part. Nothing is really going to top th.. read more

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