Very Vivid

Very Vivid

A Poem by Davidgeo
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the rigid
noise discipline
goes quickly
down with whiskey

and upon digits
counted slowly
very much in rhythm
these winded memories

holding riches
twisted audibly
in situations
tinted unintended
though still,
so very vivid
if eternally uncommitted
lies these memories
to us 
to everyone else
 these memories 
 somewhere unclear 
somewhere in between
some very good whiskey
and a very deep sleep

© 2020 Davidgeo


Author's Note

Davidgeo
Talisker, 10 year old... it's really good scotch.

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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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