Camper

Camper

A Poem by Davidgeo
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i don't hate this
it just hurts
sometimes

and i wish

... I just wish i was dunber
so you didn't have to try
so f*****g hard to trick me
all the time...

sometimes

© 2020 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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This intrigued me very interesting
I like the poem where it’s like a. Conversation like this one
Either with yourself or another
One typo needs fixer dumber I think
Unless it was supposed to be For effect so just saying lol
Good work here

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

I really didn't mean to spell it "dunber" at first but after I read it over I figured why knot?
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Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

4 Years Ago

Lol love it



Reviews

This intrigued me very interesting
I like the poem where it’s like a. Conversation like this one
Either with yourself or another
One typo needs fixer dumber I think
Unless it was supposed to be For effect so just saying lol
Good work here

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

I really didn't mean to spell it "dunber" at first but after I read it over I figured why knot?
read more
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

4 Years Ago

Lol love it

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Added on April 30, 2020
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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