Exotic Matter

Exotic Matter

A Poem by Davidgeo
"

(to us)

"
what falls up
must never come down
what never ends
must never begin
what has no form
must never take shape
what never sleeps
must never awake
what cannot die
must not be alive
though,
what will never make sense
will still always exist
(to us)
this universe 
she is, always exotic

© 2020 Davidgeo


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I like your inclusion of "to us", because we are the only known observers of the universe. Your poem is food for thought, and it's way more helpful in understanding the universe than mythical stories, no matter how exotic they may be.

Posted 4 Years Ago


An interesting piece. Wonderful ponderings. It is largely because of such things that I became a physicist. And this summarizes the type of thinking that goes on in modern physics. It is the search for "truisms" that cannot be avoided, and which underlie the workings of existence. It's heady business. I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 4 Years Ago


reminds me of my Vipassana experience

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

… you're a lucky girl.
KWP

4 Years Ago

I am a lucky girl - This be true - and thankfully Australia is still a lucky country - :)
Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

Australia is objectively awesome, unless you occasionally like a little icy weather. (being close t.. read more
To say the least I found this fascinating. There is so much truth to be found here.

Take care - Dave

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rick Puetter

4 Years Ago

Ah, well you're getting right down to the definition of the counting numbers, the integers, the Pean.. read more
Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

You are an excellent teacher.
Rick Puetter

4 Years Ago

Thank you. That is a deep and meaningful complement to me. As a scientist, I feel a deep obligation.. read more
Loved every part of it. I can't believe you thought of this. It's genius.
Im happy to read your poems.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

Thanks. I'm glad to make you happy.
Bonnie Paige

4 Years Ago

It's hard to think about everything that is and then make you see its opposite. Enjoyable thinking .. read more
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Added on April 23, 2020
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