Me and You

You and I

Walk around

Take it in

The world, she is your friend

And the people

Take them in

And you will see...

That there are no "friends"

And in time

You will find 

Time 

And do ask it questions

Even if it will find you

Always and Forever

(inconsequential) 

To the point where making friend's

Out of enemies

That is all that's left 

(this is not a poem)

Author's Note

Reviews

[Markus Anthony]

That picture is the first image of a black hole. As I read through your work, I imagine the protagonist as a walkibg backhole. It sucks any matter (people, relationships, knowledge, time) that gets near it, yet he finds emptiness and void and is left with questions about his purpose. It happens in everyone of us. Thank you for sharing your work.

[Davidgeo]

Clever interpretation. Very clever.

I am beyond ecstatic that you recognized the picture.

Where do you stand? Letting it happen eventually or fighting the inevitability until cannot?

[Davidgeo]

insert (you) before "cannot"

[Davidgeo]

…. they're the same things. I think. But I'm usually wrong.

[RebeccaRose]

Brilliant writing.
"And in time
You will find
Time
And do ask it questions
Even if it will find you"

I love those lines. They almost sing to me.

[Davidgeo]

Don't forget about the (inconsequential) part. It's rather important.

[R.J Calzonetti (Siniste..]

I think this makes for great poem really. It's honest.

[Davidgeo]

Not a poem. I try an always be honest. It rarely works out, but, I am able to pay the cost. This could be a poem; you should take it and make it one.

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

I'll think about it, could be a good theme to focus on.