Form Follows Function

"Form follows function..." - Louis Sullivan

culling the skies
turning gods into guys
talking movement's with maths

ice doesn't have to be cold
rain does not have to be liquid

solids do not have to be hard

,
,

,

by what basis do i judge normal

 and abnormal?

by which planet i feast
by which planet i breath
by the manner in which i see
for the reason's in which i think
as does form follow function
so a life, one lived right, is an artform

Reviews

[Sharda]

The last couple of lines brought out the essence of the poetry. Very simple yet very deep

[Ookpik]

Sharp ending man - only advice is to check your apostrophe placement:

Gods, is god plural - god's is god with a possessive.

The last two lines were on point though - read like a baseball mitt wrapping around a ball.

[Davidgeo]

Thanks man. Glad you enjoyed the ending.