Dumb Laughter

is still funny

to wander
does not mean that you are lost
to pander
does not mean that you are right
and to live
takes much more than just, "insight"

true loss is your teacher
real pain is your friend

to break and then,

      fix yourself 

again

is to be strong 

with real strength

and once again,

to those who pretend
to be right 

just because
to those who do pander
and then call it - "insight"

are the jokes on the way

down a path

that is - (truly)

mandatory....

so please darling do,

please stop and laugh

if you can

if you please

stop and point

out their end's

and have a laugh

with your friend's

and grow us all 

               a new world

with maybe,

just a little

just a bit, slightly more...

                                       intelligence? 

Author's Note

I'm just another stupid narcicisst... so, don't take it too seriously. Unless you're stupid.

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Dave... these are my sentiments every day
of my life... mistakes I have made... and now in the
twilight I can see clearly. Your poetry is delicately
embroidered on my tapestry. Intelligence is on my
Bucket List. truly, Pat

[Davidgeo]

It's on mine too. Let's hope we find it somewhere along the ride.