Astro Cats

making sense without purpose

it's an artform
like talking to yourself

very calmly
at the grocery store
or eating yogurt with a fork

oblivious to spoons
or pretending your f*****g cat
is a god damned astronaut

no, not really
i can't truly say that's right

when designing purpose
out of non sense
is what people do
and making sense
without purpose
is what crazy people do

 talking to themselves

 at the grocery store

out of place
 with their god damned
absurd mathematics
 and f*****g
 astronaut cats

making sense
 without purpose

from a non obvious

             existence 

oh,

how people live like this. . .

 is probably not as bad as it seems

(if you don't really think about it)

…(or if you do

really think about it

   it is everything

One form of art

or Another

Author's Note

Reviews

[augustus]

Making sense of your poetry is, in itself, an art form. However, eating yoghurt with a fork is not impossible. It just takes longer to finish the pot!

[.]

Sounds light and nice, as always impressive combination of words. You know poems are like magical that only a poet can play on. Just like that this poems is very nice one. :)

Keep writing, Good Luck!
-MC

[Davidgeo]

"light and nice"? You didn't read more than the first few lines of this did you?

Ugh. D********g.

Most people here wouldn't say anything and just accept the attention... but I'm not one of those people. I don't care if anyone reads me, I write for a different reason. That whole "social media lets be superficial friends for no f*****g reason" game is not one I'm interested in playing.

Leave a real review or f**k off. I'm done pandering to you f*****g people.

[.]

By light and nice I mean, the words, most of the poems I have read before this one were heavy words medival times or combined words.
It's not a very long poem that I won't read to its end. If you don't want to hear what your readers say and don't find it wortful you can clear these reviews for sure or don't reply. It's better than being rude. You're simply insulting yourself. See you can't even express yourself politely to a younger person, what makes you a writer then? You know what you people can only cause fire but I didn't learn to insult anyone so.
Even being a younger person I am more respectful than you are even at your age. So I will take you as a little angry kid. And I respect your innocence if you are left with any.😉

[Davidgeo]

Don't let me troll you like this. I think you're better than that.

[.]

Troll me! Oh is that you... Thanks for telling me, at least now I know who has been trolling me since a few days. Do whatever you want to.... I don't expect anything better than this.

[Davidgeo]

I was just talking about this particular thread. You have to come to me to be trolled, I don't troll other peoples work and you will know it when it's me doing it. Someone has been trolling my stuff lately too, every few months a certain user who used to be popular here creates a new profile and tries to start s**t. I'm not going to mention her name in public because that's exactly what she's looking for.

[Davidgeo]

Why did you downvote the other comment? That person had nothing to do with what upset you. Don't be petty and reactionary when people upset you on the internet. That's childish and serves no other purpose than superficially soothing a bruised ego. I know you're young and reacting to someone's who's not exactly that mature himself but try and be more mature about things like this.

[.]

Oh did I? I don't do such things. You're really onto trolling me! Seriously you've lost your conscience! Now you're a mannerless kid.😕 Kids don't troll though.
OK can we end this? I am not here to set up a fight. And you don't sound that bad though. Peace Peace Peace!

[Davidgeo]

Besides the fact that we're the only three probably reading this poem at the moment, I noticed the downvote came right after you left your comment misunderstanding what I meant about trolling. I only do it to people who interact with me first. To be honest, I don't find your writing worth the time it takes to read so, me trolling your work is just not something that's ever going to happen. You're an objectively bad writer and just not very intelligent. But feel free to believe whatever you like, you're too insignificant to me for it to matter anyway.