Time Sliced

into slices

in the density lies eternity,

and in the art of

 seperation

lies the beauty of

 all of time

Author's Note

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

A lot crammed into a few lines here. Density in line 1 might indicate oneness, wherein no time exists. Separation, which corresponds to the slicing of the title, would partition that density into segments, creating the illusion of time. Heavy stuff. You might consider dropping the commas as they are and putting one at the end of line 1.

[Davidgeo]

I think time seen as anything other than a measure device is an illusion. Your advice about the comma is good.

[Intothemilkyway]

It's so short but so beautiful.
Separation has a lot to offer. I never take it as some mere thing.
More than the meeting and all of that stuff what i like most are breakups. In any kind of form there is so much to learn from it. Sometimes you really never see things how they are. Only when they end you can see more of the picture and what holds inside.

[Davidgeo]

Your take on this is right on. But how you apply it to your life is what a clinical psychologist would call the foundations of an abandonment complex. Which is far, far more common than anyone would like to admit so don't feel bad.