The Other Men

The Other Men

A Poem by Davidgeo
"

on time on target

"
a strong body supports a strong mind
so anyone can shoot well
now do it cold
now do it tired
break your fingers
sprain your wrist
lose your exo
s**t the bed
lose your food
destroy your ego
lose your dog
forget that SOP
lose your lady
lose your family 
to some a*s clown
named f****n' jody. . .
lose it all 
to ruck up
and get it back
and pretend it's -
"everything alright"
under pressure
. . . into heat
f**k the noise
f**k the wind
and f**k the world -
because even now,
because even still. . .
all you gotta do is -
shut the f**k up
and hit the target
every single time
full of f*****g adrenaline
precise like -
   …
 a professional 
 - just like most things, 
simply cannot do

© 2019 Davidgeo


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Felt that, like a pounding of marching feet growing louder with each line.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

I didn't really enjoy my time in the military but it undoubtedly made me a better person in almost e.. read more
Semper Fi....this hits home in my heart and head.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

That's a very good thing. I used to be all about the Army but since I got out I've learned that, fun.. read more

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Added on September 15, 2019
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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