Gross

Gross

A Poem by Davidgeo

There is no going back.  Time's a jerk like that.
The idea is probably distorted beyond use 

anyway

Ya limp f****n salad
It's still kinda creepy to say ...
"is it still kinda creepy to say...?"

like yesterday was a day 

and everything in it
that never once happened
until you let it...

our future influences our past

You should try smoking a little grass when that happens
To become obvious

... just a little
as a substitute for seeing a psychiatrist

(it doesn't get easier)

but, a good idea for a comedy skit would be
 therapy sessions
That never happen
At least,
Not with a therapist
(take your pants off)

show me your mind
Lets get weird with it

© 2019 Davidgeo


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I am not sure I have the words to describe what this does to me but it is most intense and definitely coming from a very deep place. I believe there are many who would substitute a little grass for a psychiatrist. It is not easy to find one that works for you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The cold hard truth crossed with bitter reality. Excellent descriptions.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the dichotomy of traditional poetic imagery with flashes of the obscene.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am not sure I have the words to describe what this does to me but it is most intense and definitely coming from a very deep place. I believe there are many who would substitute a little grass for a psychiatrist. It is not easy to find one that works for you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this! Outlandish! My style.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 20, 2019
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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