a different place

after long enough

that i see
i can see
that everything

cannot be seen

not all at once

i can see
not everything
that will be left

can be seen

in my life

after time
by anyone

left behind

long enough

after that

after this

before

Author's Note

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

The poet seems to be speaking about the limitations of a single human life. One life is simply not long enough to take in the totality of existence. The last three lines are enigmatic, and I cannot comment on them. Not sure if the poem represents acceptance or bitterness.

[Davidgeo]

I can't really be sure whether this bends more towards acceptance or bitterness. More often than not I'm writing to find answers than it is because I have them. At the end of the day it's irrelevant... if you can find anything well then you really do have something.

[Happy-times]

Hello, this is Silente... You left me dozens upon dozens of the same reviews when I had to leave for a year, mate... Saying if I came back you would not block me, and you would own up to, and have a public conversation...

You have rescinded on that. Which is fine, but now you attempt to go against your own word...? You block me, make multiple profiles... I get it, you are angry... I am not going to argue the validation, since I was a f*****g c**t to you...

But at least give me a chance to apologize, eh?

Because I DO apologize
I also ask for your forgiveness...

Not for defending people, I mean I can not ever say sorry for that... But in HOW I did it, and how f*****g ridiculous of a level I sunk...
Totally not me, and is probably a reflection of how I was taking things in my personal life at the time...
No... IT WAS a reflection...
IT WAS ME...
No excuse on my part

I would like to offer peace, however if you feel you still need to lash out at, or attack me...
That is your prerogative, and you are probably owed a bit of steam... I hope at some point you un-block me and I am able to further make amends, or read and enjoy your insights in writing without having to make another account in order to do so...

Again, all up to you. You do not owe me or anyone a thing...

You do you

I am not going to bother you or push the subject
You are free to do w/e you would like to me, mate

Good to see you are alive and still kicking

P.S... She knows all my writing, a moot point to talk about more of it with her : /

Perhaps keep your reviews within the same bounds you deem others to stay within when it comes to courtesy in critique...?

If you wanna attack me, I am right here...
No need to involve others hard-work right?
You CAN, I mean, and i am sure will continue to do so...
Just...
I am an open target...!
Pretttty hard to misss...
I guess a target begging is not as fun as a target moving...
Aha