Taking By Giving

Taking By Giving

A Poem by Davidgeo
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what i stole from you

when i, stole it from you
who you are, i showed it to you

for your troubles

i showed you what you had
i showed you what you are
i showed to you a door. . .

untimely as it was

i showed to you, 
   that all you really wanted
   was just to want

© 2019 Davidgeo


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Sounds like a comment on a complicated ex-relationship. It appears the speaker is delivering a riposte to an outraged accusation by the former partner. Perhaps the accuser will be bitter, perhaps regard it as a lesson. Whatever, I don't see a reunion occurring.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

When someone steals your favorite thing, that's when you really know what's your favorite thing.



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Sounds like a comment on a complicated ex-relationship. It appears the speaker is delivering a riposte to an outraged accusation by the former partner. Perhaps the accuser will be bitter, perhaps regard it as a lesson. Whatever, I don't see a reunion occurring.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

When someone steals your favorite thing, that's when you really know what's your favorite thing.

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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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