Funny Sad

Funny Sad

A Poem by Davidgeo
"

happy miserable

"

what's a heaven

filled with demons?

why a tragic earth

all dead alive

why a killing joke?

rhyming tragedy

with the comedy...

what's a hell

filled with angels?

why a tortured mind

a welcomed prison

something funny sad

© 2019 Davidgeo


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"rhyming tragedy
with the comedy..."
great couplet
i've thought about this some
certainly no definitive conclusions
but it would seem that tragedy and comedy
are less opposites than analogs
adjacent on the continuum
divided only by a gradient fade
of the awkward and cringe-worthy
great piece


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Welcome to life, dude, the danger of the thinker is thought it's self, and all it's myriad joys and pains, good poem,

Posted 5 Years Ago


hmmmn, Nice poem... brief and meaningful

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

They are all oxymorons.
Words intended to be in conjunction with one another also contradict one another.
A demon filled heaven or an angel filled hell, major contradictions yet, they are used by the poet to describe a world or life at odds.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It has been said life is a tragedy and a comedy simultaneously. That may be what the poet is getting at in this offering. The poem is really a series of contradictions on the nature of life. Unless I am mistaken, there is also a tone of bitterness or frustration here. Perhaps the trick is to let the contradictions be what they are and try to move beyond them.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

You project too many assumptions onto the author with your reviews. What you should really be more.. read more
"rhyming tragedy
with the comedy..."
great couplet
i've thought about this some
certainly no definitive conclusions
but it would seem that tragedy and comedy
are less opposites than analogs
adjacent on the continuum
divided only by a gradient fade
of the awkward and cringe-worthy
great piece


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can only ever imagine the perspective of a tortured mind - such as this life has blessed me with fortitude and strength

I think this is something I may sink into at some point - but then still, it will only be perspective

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Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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