End to Begin to End to Begin

End to Begin to End to Begin

A Poem by Davidgeo
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begin to an end to a begin to an end

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who wants to live forever

if no one lives forever?

 

when a hero is only as good as their villain

we all must confront our own villains

 

without challenge life is decadent

without death living is irrelevant

 

without sadness. . . what in the f**k is happiness?

© 2019 Davidgeo


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Now you`ve got me thinking Queen and Freddie Mercury. Big fan and have seen Bohemian Rhapsody twice. Only a fool would want to live forever.

Yep, it's all about balance. You won't know what happiness is until you've experienced sadness. Opposing emotions. Now I'm thinking magnets when I should be doing chores :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

On the surface it can be a discomforting thought... that we all have to die one day. But underneath.. read more



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that's it.. life is a two-faced coin and we must handle it from both sides.
Powerful poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


You're so right! Only a fool would wish to live forever. To what end? Seeing friends come and go it would seem an endless chain of sorrows. The heroes and the villains would all be intermixed.

Take care - Dave

Posted 5 Years Ago


We must confront our own faults without pointing the finger in the direction of someone else.
We can only find peace within our hearts .
Religion distracts s
Destroys causing confusion. Only by letting God live in our hearts we can have an relationship with him. Then we have hope and a reason for living by accepting his free gift of love forgiveness is the key to setting us free. Well written piece of work.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Dave, I really like this theme (I've written of it too).
We have to know both spectrums to appreciate one or the other.
And the growth lies in the balance found in between.
(I think)


Posted 5 Years Ago


You open many cans of worms with this one - good cans ;)

We will not appreciate breakthrough if we did not struggle a while....the sweetness we taste sometimes is just that little bit sweeter because we know how sour life can be....

I agree with Chris.....get a guitar and turn this into a song ;)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

…. agreeing with Chris is almost always a good idea.
SleeplessVolcano

5 Years Ago

Trying is great, but if your intention is to dig, using a spade makes it easier ;)
Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

Ha.... the mind pierces deeper every time though. Physically digging is for dickholes.
I have had to do some serious thinking lately so I am going to come back to this piece when I am not feeling so heavy. Excellent title.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

Serious thinking can be a strange thing.... regardless of topic; life is kinda weird when you really.. read more
Now you`ve got me thinking Queen and Freddie Mercury. Big fan and have seen Bohemian Rhapsody twice. Only a fool would want to live forever.

Yep, it's all about balance. You won't know what happiness is until you've experienced sadness. Opposing emotions. Now I'm thinking magnets when I should be doing chores :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

On the surface it can be a discomforting thought... that we all have to die one day. But underneath.. read more

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