Mass

Mass

A Poem by Davidgeo
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there are numbers so large they cannot be named

spots so blind you can't know they exist

things so heavy they weigh more than "existence"

faces so pretty they can't ever be named

and memories so dead it's like they never even happened

© 2019 Davidgeo


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Some experiences cannot be captured, I hear you. I took a trail to a certain overlook I thereto fore had never viewed. Reaching the top a scene unfolded that left me breathless, unable to articulate my discovery. My response was immediate. Looking to the heavens I bellowed, "THANK YOU!" Thank you for reminding me of such profundity.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

I discovered this in a very similar fashion, while on a trek up a mountain I had never been up befor.. read more
AllenS

5 Years Ago

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It's true our language falls short in exressing the true levels of beauty. As linguists searches for words. I think children have a much better voice for such things.
I especially liked the closing line. I have a fact or two that belongs to me but the memories of it are gone forever lost.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

Even the sights that we are able to see fall short of what's truly out there. Physically speaking,.. read more
Cherrie Palmer

5 Years Ago

Yes, what we don't know clearly outweighs what we do.
Some experiences cannot be captured, I hear you. I took a trail to a certain overlook I thereto fore had never viewed. Reaching the top a scene unfolded that left me breathless, unable to articulate my discovery. My response was immediate. Looking to the heavens I bellowed, "THANK YOU!" Thank you for reminding me of such profundity.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

I discovered this in a very similar fashion, while on a trek up a mountain I had never been up befor.. read more
AllenS

5 Years Ago

Beyond the beyond
Lies more
Within the within
Lies more
Infinite reality.. read more

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Added on February 16, 2019
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Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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