Richly Poor

rich 

out of a plastic cup

you save for nothing

but f**k up. . .

everything

shame ensues,

no one cares. . .

but the poorly rich

in a fancy closet

"f****n' thanks a lot"

 we're in love with each other

Author's Note

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

This speaks to me of hitting rock bottom. That's where you took me in these short lines. Really economical for you. It's morning here but for you over there the worse time to hit rock bottom
. Did you change the last line or did I not see it on my mobile? It kinda puts a whole different perspective on this piece now.

Chris

[Davidgeo]

It's been too long to know for certain. I do violently edit things in the 'right after' I put them out. I'm glad it spoke at you anyways either way.

meow.

[Chris Shaw]

It spoke to me both ways and I like cats. I think I got a bargain, two for the price of one:)

[Neville]

I kinda like this post, I kinda like it a lot..

[Davidgeo]

It's a poem about humans. I'm definitely happy you liked this. It really fills my pants.