Love

by the hand my darling dear

please do now

    let me take you

to the beauty once we shared
sweetly sung within a song
that we both thought was forgotten
please let us go just once more
and please let us sing together 
all the words we thought forgotten
in that key we thought was dead 

please take my hand my dear

please show me how to do this 

    let me give you everything

all i ever had inside me

make it anything you want

Author's Note

Reviews

[Stacy Purvis]

So Beautiful. Bravo. It's nice to see romantic emotion from a Male once in awhile.

[Davidgeo]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Men who can't emote romantically at least every once in a while aren't really men, they are more like boys... but those who do it constantly tend to be more manipulative than genuine. At least I think so anyway.

[Relic]

How very odd to see Mr. Dave write about Love. :) Not a bad poem either. I'm impressed.

[Davidgeo]

Thank you very much Mr. Tim. I'm glad to have impressed you... especially in an odd way.

[Ookpik]

It's a lovely sentiment. Feels like the kind of work that leads to profound breakthrough.

[Chris Shaw]

How uplifting to hear you write about love in this way. A love that seems to have fallen by the wayside but now has opportunities for revival. Nicely composed and your words came across very sincerely.

Chris

[Davidgeo]

Thanks Chris, I'm glad you liked it.

I do have a very sweet side, but I'm extremely picky with who I let bring that out. Usually I drive people away, especially those I care for but I'm learning to overcome that whole abandonment complex... and today was a good day.

[Chris Shaw]

That makes me pleased to hear that you:ve had a good day and that you are learning to overcome what has troubled you. Have a good week-end Dave.

Chris