Not a Good Poem

Not a Good Poem

A Poem by Davidgeo
"

… seriously

"
you can piss in the shower
but you never piss in the bath
you've never been cringey?
ha... don't make me laugh
Do you eat your feedback?
Always, always, always. . .
Eat your feed back 
Devour that s**t
(digest it
progress from it
become a better person
because of that)
you won't be so cringey
I swear at you...
I promise - go f**k yourself?
You can piss in the shower
But never piss in the bath
we all know that you can
but. . .
it'd be the wrong kind of stew
on the precipice of making sense
and being offensive -  why not do whatever you want?
with your free time...
at a different time
free from the devil of responsibility 

(you're gonna die... just, like, me)
but at a different time

© 2018 Davidgeo


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Added on November 3, 2018
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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