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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Legends Never Die

Legends Never Die

A Poem by Davidgeo
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“When you talk about perseverance, that is the true definition of it. Even when a superhero’s knocked down he’s still a superhero and Derrick Rose showed why he’s still a superhero.” - Lebron James

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one play at a time
one day at a time
legends never give up
legends never stop trying
one broken down day at a time
one broken down play at a time
legends never ever quit
legends never surrender
when all seems to be lost
hard work is undefeated
when all seems to bet against you
hard work is inspiration
to the special ones
to the real ones
to the legends. . . 
where nothing is certain
to the superstars. . .
anything is possible
they are the epitome perseverance 
one struggle at a time
one failure at a time
when your world is all but broken
when no one's left to believe in you
to still never ever give up
to never ever stop believing 
in yourself and your game. . .
that's legendary perseverance

© 2018 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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Though the poem speaks of super heroes, I believe its greater value lies in what it says to the rest of us, those whose perseverance in the face of day to day frustrations and reverses will not be rewarded with recognition or financial remuneration. To be able to keep at it for the sheer honor of doing so is its own reward, whether anyone ever recognizes it or not.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Kind of, but not really. Of course it's not literally about superheroes, I'm just not that kind of .. read more



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I find this poem very inspirational, never give up, never surrender, find the strength inside yourself to overcome any obstacle. Really enjoyed it.


Posted 6 Years Ago


Very powerful message!
Great work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Thanks Ray.
I read this and felt you were speaking to me - so that's kinda perfect.

Your reply to John is very true to - we all have this stuff within us - in fact we have the whole universe within us, we are all made of this stuff we have it all. There are those who are aware of what you speak and those that are still sleeping on it.

That one line - anything is possible - yes - look at the planet we have created - good or bad - anything is possible - we should all choose wisely :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

It's actually two lines split in half … "when nothing is certain / anything is possible"... an ol.. read more
I don’t know if they are built better, spliced with a dash extra of premium DNA, giving them a starting advantage, so to speak and being so endowed, do they become so addicted to the superlatives that winning is as critical to them as the air they breathe? Is there a field of study for these bionic people, their minds? Would be great for future human engineering.

It's different for lesser mortals though, they have their limits of endurance, they do give up and run.
Thank you for the RR.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Yes, they are built better than us... for sure a luckier roll of the DNA dice at conception. That's.. read more
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the link. You’re welcome.
I agree with John, the true heroes are those that, despite all the nay-sayers, struggle through and persevere. They manage to conquer the injustices heaped upon them. They are the ones that can convince a child that he or she is worth the extra effort you are providing so that they will make the effort to succeed for themselves.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Though the poem speaks of super heroes, I believe its greater value lies in what it says to the rest of us, those whose perseverance in the face of day to day frustrations and reverses will not be rewarded with recognition or financial remuneration. To be able to keep at it for the sheer honor of doing so is its own reward, whether anyone ever recognizes it or not.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Kind of, but not really. Of course it's not literally about superheroes, I'm just not that kind of .. read more
This is like the national anthem for ancient Greek heroes. There's an epic tone to this; likes it's a rant your football coach gives you before the game to hype you up. Nice work here :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LazerRays

6 Years Ago

Yeah. They both died. Except Achilles killed Hector. And dragged his body around for days until Odys.. read more
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

I'm aware of the story... most people are. What I was alluding to is that Hector is a more team ori.. read more
LazerRays

6 Years Ago

Ah. I see...
Your swagger here is monumental...this is what I call an adrenaline rush! "To never ever give up, to never ever stop believing in yourself and in your game." THAT is perseverance, THAT is excellence, personified!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Thanks Kelly, that's generously kind of you.

A basketball player who was once prodi.. read more
Kelly Scheppers

6 Years Ago

I'm sure it was an exhilarating high for him as well!
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Ha... yeah, truly. Us regular humans will never know the highs and the lows those guys go through... read more

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