that is not energy that is insanity of enormous proportions bizarre like a walking abortion disturbing like child extortion deranged and outraged that manic rampage . . . it's a curse on society and an insult to sanity
What caught my eyes was the description at first. This poem is blunt- very blunt. But don't fret, it had a negative tone to it when being negative. A change.
I am bipolar so just bear in mind that not all bipolar is the same lol. it's all harshfully written but truth is always better than lies.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Okay, I won't fret. And please bear in mind... you're not the only one who's bipolar. It kinda see.. read moreOkay, I won't fret. And please bear in mind... you're not the only one who's bipolar. It kinda seems like you're assuming you know something about me when you do not know anything about me.
6 Years Ago
exactly why i have to assume there dave. i dont know anything about you. so i have to assume to writ.. read moreexactly why i have to assume there dave. i dont know anything about you. so i have to assume to write a review.
6 Years Ago
You don't have to assume anything. Just critique the work... is it a relatively accurate generalize.. read moreYou don't have to assume anything. Just critique the work... is it a relatively accurate generalized description of bipolar disorder or not? You don't need to assume you know anything personal about me to do that.
This was like, a stereotypical type of conversation two people with bipolar disorder would have. Ha.. read moreThis was like, a stereotypical type of conversation two people with bipolar disorder would have. Ha...hahaha... it is pretty funny.
bugger me, my meds ran out - can you whip up to the pharmacy and get me some more please ?? :D
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
I don't think we take the same drugs. But maybe if you take enough of it... it'll have some kind of.. read moreI don't think we take the same drugs. But maybe if you take enough of it... it'll have some kind of affect.
(or is it effect?... I'm pretty high right now so...)
I do like this dave I don't have bi polar but certainly have major personality issues that I have grown to accept over the years and now that im older I can look back and see that things that I did maybe 20 years or 15 years were wrong and maybe sick
of course now its affecting my work, I don't feel normal like others , sure I can write I can write free flow but what else nothing really. I lose ability to keep and make friends, etc just not a normal person for my age, lol but hey we are all different and that's why I love this site, we usually form friendships across the miles with our poetry as our personality or persona. I feel pretty well accepted here more than I do at work or by my family siblings im sorry to sayjust a snippet of my life
love your poem it brings awareness to mental health thanks david that's all we can do bring awareness to it out in the open. Its mental awareness week here in Sydney. take care always
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Never mind your coworkers... never let yourself stray to far from your family though. I can't make .. read moreNever mind your coworkers... never let yourself stray to far from your family though. I can't make friends either but family, they are precious. My family and I don't really get along but we never, ever stray far enough that we can't help each other. And that's something so precious even the most vile string of insults or vicious physical confrontation will ever kill. The only real obstacle between us these days is always pride... pride and superficial jealousy. It's easy to say but so very hard in real life --- love unconditionally. F**k every single other thing - love your family unconditionally. Even if it means making a mockery of your pride... no one else can love you like your family, and you can love no one else like your family. That s**t is precious.... blood is precious. (I refuse to edit this response; apologies for any typos)
What caught my eyes was the description at first. This poem is blunt- very blunt. But don't fret, it had a negative tone to it when being negative. A change.
I am bipolar so just bear in mind that not all bipolar is the same lol. it's all harshfully written but truth is always better than lies.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Okay, I won't fret. And please bear in mind... you're not the only one who's bipolar. It kinda see.. read moreOkay, I won't fret. And please bear in mind... you're not the only one who's bipolar. It kinda seems like you're assuming you know something about me when you do not know anything about me.
6 Years Ago
exactly why i have to assume there dave. i dont know anything about you. so i have to assume to writ.. read moreexactly why i have to assume there dave. i dont know anything about you. so i have to assume to write a review.
6 Years Ago
You don't have to assume anything. Just critique the work... is it a relatively accurate generalize.. read moreYou don't have to assume anything. Just critique the work... is it a relatively accurate generalized description of bipolar disorder or not? You don't need to assume you know anything personal about me to do that.
This was like, a stereotypical type of conversation two people with bipolar disorder would have. Ha.. read moreThis was like, a stereotypical type of conversation two people with bipolar disorder would have. Ha...hahaha... it is pretty funny.
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