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Biblical

Biblical

A Poem by Davidgeo
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 a character makes funny voices
funny voices do not make a character

and as good people make good choices
so those choices do not make those people

i can mimic a good human
pretend any manner of morality
feign so many kinds of do-good-ery 

   to get close to you
      show you choices

      narrow your options

"those who do good can expect..."
   good things (of course?)

how silly. . .
   what an insult to nature...
     
selling coupons to heaven

playing coercion's
      off desperation's
ignoring evolution. . . 

you must be the devil
   (pretending not to be random)
             I love your book. . .

it's high fiction  


  (who the fug am I talking too?)

© 2018 Davidgeo


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I’m quite a fan of the beginning sentiment. Good works and in-genuine words or actions are not what get you anywhere. At least according to the Bible.

I also like the way the poem is written in general. I think it carries on to the next concept well.

The more science classes I take and the more research I do, the more I realize just how much the science world exaggerates or even outright lies about disproving the Bible. Just because their view is MORE scientifically PROBABLE does not make it definite TRUTH. But I’m getting further into it than most people like to discuss with idiots like me.

I always appreciate people’s outright honesty about what they think.

I enjoyed reading


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

H L Rose

6 Years Ago

Literally the only argument I gave was that they haven’t proven their dating methods through real-.. read more
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

You 'literally' said that science books lie specifically to disprove the bible... in your very first.. read more
H L Rose

6 Years Ago

The scientific COMMUNITY not science!!! Yea night.



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Yourself, you are are talking to yourself. But because you have spent too much time in a locked room, it is beginning to sound like a discourse with God.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Classy response. I didn't criticize your looks, just your responses. Given your situation I could .. read more
Ookpik

6 Years Ago

It's not the curls I have a problem with, it's the condescension beneath the curls that bothers me -.. read more
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Right. That's not bullshit at all. Can we be done with this now? You're annoying to deal with.
I’m quite a fan of the beginning sentiment. Good works and in-genuine words or actions are not what get you anywhere. At least according to the Bible.

I also like the way the poem is written in general. I think it carries on to the next concept well.

The more science classes I take and the more research I do, the more I realize just how much the science world exaggerates or even outright lies about disproving the Bible. Just because their view is MORE scientifically PROBABLE does not make it definite TRUTH. But I’m getting further into it than most people like to discuss with idiots like me.

I always appreciate people’s outright honesty about what they think.

I enjoyed reading


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

H L Rose

6 Years Ago

Literally the only argument I gave was that they haven’t proven their dating methods through real-.. read more
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

You 'literally' said that science books lie specifically to disprove the bible... in your very first.. read more
H L Rose

6 Years Ago

The scientific COMMUNITY not science!!! Yea night.
If you wished to make some people (and me) uncomfortable, you accomplished that quite well here. Still, I’ll pray for the poet tonight :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Yes, I wished.

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Added on September 25, 2018
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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