Like a Glass of Water

Like a Glass of Water

A Poem by Davidgeo
"

in a quiet place

"
addiction is a temple
and everyone can be fanatical 
ridiculous and confounding 
in any moment
what we do is what defines us
in that moment
and what you say can be anything
something irrelevant
or very important 
maybe just a joke
or something banal  
like a glass of water
in a quiet place

© 2018 Davidgeo


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Addiction ‘is’ a temple,

And whether one practices through simple prayer, morning mass or blind zealotry, it is the temple they have in common.

What we do ‘does’ define us.

Be it as conformity to a cliche, with the profundity of a truly original thought, or in the abstract paradox of a well devised joke.

This one caught my attention - well worth the read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


A glass of water in a quiet place, to many in this world would be like paradise. A glass of water to someone dying of thirst is everything. Good evening David.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Everyone has their temple. Good afternoon Christine.
"What we do is what defines us." Now that's a proverb we can bring to its fruition!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

In a perfect world I think we'd all think about that right before we did anything incredibly stupid... read more
Love the music
Very nice

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is lovely left me tranquil before work with my tea

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

That's what I was going for. Glad you liked it. You should smoke some grass with your tea.
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

6 Years Ago

Lol no but thanks

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Johnsburg, IL



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