positive opposites

positive opposites

A Poem by Davidgeo
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sweet to the sour

"
to taste the sweet
you must know the sour

there is nothing positive
without its opposite 

and you will not eat
without the killing

as you must see death
to know what life is
so we all must lose
to know what's winning
because we cannot live
without that consequence

as there exists the bad
to know what good is
for this life is sweet
because death is sour
     and we are alive
  because someone died
because that's what life is
    and you cannot hide
     at least,
                not from that
no,
    not from this
   

© 2018 Davidgeo


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Opposites. How I agree, you can't appreciate total joy until you have hit despair, you can't appreciate living until you have witnessed dying. You don't appreciate the goodness in people unless you have seen evil. All this makes much sense to me. A good composition here David.

Chris



Posted 6 Years Ago


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Love this piece as well. So true.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Opposites. How I agree, you can't appreciate total joy until you have hit despair, you can't appreciate living until you have witnessed dying. You don't appreciate the goodness in people unless you have seen evil. All this makes much sense to me. A good composition here David.

Chris



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

David loved this
i really like this style
thanks for the good read

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the kind words Julie. Hope you're doing well.
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

6 Years Ago

yeh muddling along same to you :)
Opposites opposites everywhere. Reality to its alternative reality. Mirror to the mirage.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Those are things you don't need to tell me.
Vivian Gospel

6 Years Ago

Hence love is a mirage. A biggest assfuck.

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