Welcome, To Entropy

and heat death

born a dumb stupid baby
predictably silly
then aged
into a relatively complex situation
 "intelligently" adult
  extremely "complex"

until we are not

   either one, of those things

as time passes

as we slowly degrade

   into nothing

losing all, piece by piece

 on our way

slowly. . .

to a stupid dumb death 

as an old man or lady 

predictably dumb

obtuse and silly

 to die like we was born. . .

such is life, so goes nature

so welcome doll face! - to entropy

in our place. . .

(kinda sorta) welcome!

to something simple 

then complex

back into simple 

in the end (like the beginning)

again

in the end

Author's Note

Reviews

[millennial leo]

I definitely clicked on this because I'm a nerd wanting to relive out my physical chemistry days of college but besides that point, I enjoyed your poem. Although, the ending feels a little out of place

[Davidgeo]

Thanks man. I'm kind of a science nerd myself.

You're right about the ending. But that's kinda the point; it's supposed to be out of place compared to the rest. (winding down into 'disorder' or something like that)

[Davidgeo]

ordered disorder I meant... something complex winding down to "blah"

[Davidgeo]

18 is Argon... or Ar on the periodic table. Unless you're trying to be ironic in some way I can't see... you're not a good science student.

[Davidgeo]

No thanks.

[Davidgeo]

Rahul Bakolia… you're a coward for talking stupid s**t then deleting your comments. Sure maybe I say stupid s**t sometimes but I don't pretend that I'm not exactly who I am. People like you make me sick.