Always At Some Point In Time Eventually

at some point in time
the devil always gets his due
because morality is relative
at some points in time

and every once in a while
we all do go a little mad
because no one is perfect
every once and a while

always in time eventually
everyone of us gets to die anyway
because everything ends none the less
always in time and eventually

at some point

in time

we all get what's due 

we all find the same ends

at some point

in time

always eventually 

every single thing

   turns into black

Author's Note

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Oh, well, I hadn’t read anything sobering in a while and it was kind of getting too surreal around here, so I came looking ;)

This is one way of looking at life. The inevitable (death) is always at the back of one’s mind. What’s unexpected is the f**k ups and the deceit that happen, in life, real time, always in time and eventually. You got me there, mate.

Thanks. This was a fine read, indeed.

[Davidgeo]

I'm glad you enjoyed.

[LKBillips]

I like how you wrapped your stanzas with the repeating lines. That was pretty neat. A different look at mortality. An inevitable end. Nice piece.

[Davidgeo]

Was it really now?

[LKBillips]

no I just wanted to say something nice since you read request me all your writings and you're super sassy.

[Davidgeo]

Ah, that's more like it.

[MaximumFlight]

Our demons do collect our debts and our does we owe, and yes, we all are to die someday. I do have to ask; what shade of black will we see at the end?

[Davidgeo]

The shade of 'nothing'.

Even empty space is not really empty.

I like hour profile pic. And thank you for your reviews.

[Davidgeo]

oops, I meant... *your* profile pic, I like *your* profile pic.

[MaximumFlight]

Thanks you :)

[Lyricalfairydust]

i love this. Well written , completely hit the spot on what im feeling at this moment.

[Davidgeo]

Thanks. I'm happy that you could identify with this one. Sometimes my ideas don't translate into words very coherently.

[wredit.jordan]

This poem speaks the truth. Everything does end eventually. I liked the last two lines and the imagery that everything will turn to blackness. Nicely done!

[Davidgeo]

That's good to hear. I usually speak lies.

I'm glad you liked it.

[Chris Shaw]

Love Amy Winehouse, great track. Have to agree with you. None of us know when our time is going to be up, but we are all going to die. There's a sobering thought.

Chris

[Davidgeo]

She was terrific wasn't she?