Like That

Like That

A Poem by Davidgeo
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High Five's and Anxiety (we're going to kill each other)

"
please gimme five good ones... 
i'm your friend
but you'll hate me
before the end
but then we'll love fest
right before that
back and forth
after everything 
after seeing things
and us going through them
between that
along treacherous paths
we'll find different reasons
for the very same things
and we'll find very similar people
on our way to the very same ends
we'll be friends
we'll be enemies
it'll go terribly 
and it'll be lovely
and it never ends pretty
not for anyone. . .
we're all similar people 

like that

© 2018 Davidgeo


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The theme is overwhelming I think this piece is top notch you did a great job.
Through the arrangement of this piece you can bask in the arts with a good feel
Further, I like the second stanza very good in its form you wrote a materpiece
I'm encouraged to read more of your writings. Lastly, the ending takes you in let's you be a friend.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

That's mighty generous of you Mario Batali.



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yes! Funnily enough I was just discussing something similar to a friend of mine recently - Arguing, I said, will deepen our relationship as friends - well either that or we shall walk way from each other ... :D

we are all similar and we are all but reflections of each other ... just how long can we put up with each other ? how lone do we need to be in each others existence before we allow ourselves to move on? That's the question. WE always get so damn attached X

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

That describes the whole "looking glass self" some dude named Cooley talked about quite well.
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The theme is overwhelming I think this piece is top notch you did a great job.
Through the arrangement of this piece you can bask in the arts with a good feel
Further, I like the second stanza very good in its form you wrote a materpiece
I'm encouraged to read more of your writings. Lastly, the ending takes you in let's you be a friend.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

That's mighty generous of you Mario Batali.

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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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