Dice Rolls and Dinosaurs

Dice Rolls and Dinosaurs

A Poem by Davidgeo
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lets pretend you don't know what dinosaurs are
lets pretend you've never seen a pair of dice rolled before

so if i were to roll that pair of dice
and it then turned into a dinosaur

if you've never seen either before

would you call that illogical?
or would you just stare and marvel?

and after one million dice rolls
and one million more dinosaurs

i bet you would bet

the next rolls gonna be a dinosaur

as we all do believe
that our future will always behave

just like our past

full of patterns
on top of patterns

and so goes our future
 

we think
(off what we see)

© 2018 Davidgeo


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yeah interesting ...

our minds work like that ... it's what we know, what we have been exposed to, blue dino's must mean more dino's for sure ...

stepping away is something that seems relatively easy, but it isn't because our minds have already been imprinted with what went before ...

which leads me to remember once again that we humans really missed the boat on this on - how the heck did we ever limit or potential to only believing within the boundaries of our own exposed minds when goddamit there is so much more ...

to. think if that stepping backwards two steps and grinding to the left for one will give us the opportunity of a bond new angle ... but it's easier innit - just to say within our own safe existence ....

did I miss the point - probably, but I just had my first doobie in years and well,,,,, none of it really matters none X

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is very intriguing, and I loved the message it sends.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Amazing writing very fruitful like off the vine created from a masterful design
Loved the sheer meaning of its piece how you handled the word structure.
Simplistic to its message very free flowing no doubt structured you got here
United creativity in its piece very likeable message to impart


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

It's not amazing writing Mario. Don't cow s**t me Mr Vitale.

Extreme's just a matter.. read more
Kinda weak stylistically, but the message is cool

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Fair enough.

Thanks for your input. I think you're right.
Nice & interesting piece of writing


Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow, that one really makes you think. I loved it. I think this was one of your best. Great job.
-Richard

Posted 6 Years Ago


Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Thanks Richard.

Perception is kind of a strange thing when we really think about it.
Nice, I even liked the spacing and how the poem visually looks clean.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Clean is usually a good thing.

Thanks for your review Guy. I'm happy you liked it.
So, it is because it has been, and it will be because it always was, thus to continue until the cookie cutter wears out completely.

Or, until someone rolls the dice and sees a cocker spaniel. Let's pretend.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Yes. Lets do that.

Pretend.
yeah interesting ...

our minds work like that ... it's what we know, what we have been exposed to, blue dino's must mean more dino's for sure ...

stepping away is something that seems relatively easy, but it isn't because our minds have already been imprinted with what went before ...

which leads me to remember once again that we humans really missed the boat on this on - how the heck did we ever limit or potential to only believing within the boundaries of our own exposed minds when goddamit there is so much more ...

to. think if that stepping backwards two steps and grinding to the left for one will give us the opportunity of a bond new angle ... but it's easier innit - just to say within our own safe existence ....

did I miss the point - probably, but I just had my first doobie in years and well,,,,, none of it really matters none X

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting thoughts. I've been reading that we need to approach each thing as if it never happened before, or the world loses it's luster and are expectations of things going a certain way can disappoint us. I like your ideas and how you conveyed them.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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