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A Poem by Davidgeo
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from an age frustrated
comes a vile rage
creeping closer 

next to me
next to you

everyday

silently
impulsively
unpredictably 

next to sons
next to daughters

lurking damaged idiots
cowards and failures
living and breathing
     spitefulness 

becoming something
too capable 

of great violence
irrational  

confusing great fame
deranged

with a true legacy
achieved

here now and quite murderous
boiling in a pathetic psychotic frustration
brewing a fatally selfish need for attention

bred from a truth
that was never learned
that is. . .
(how to lose) 
and come back
          like a man
like a women
                     like a human
worth a something 
more than nothing
beyond pure destruction
                     

© 2018 Davidgeo


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I once heard the phrase: ''if death has no cost,life has no worth'' , and for some reason, reading your poem i thought about it. Love the Pumpkings, especially their ''1979'' song. I was listening to some Shakuhachi (The Japanese Flute music) and in combination with it, it had a weird effect...haha

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

That's a wonderful song, about being a junkie, but still a wonderful song. Bradley Nowell died way .. read more
Ana B.

6 Years Ago

Yeah, i know what you mean.He has a very awesome voice, i also like the voice of the Arctic monkeys .. read more
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

I kinda forgot about the Artic Monkeys. I'm gonna have to reacquaint myself with them. I used to e.. read more



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I once heard the phrase: ''if death has no cost,life has no worth'' , and for some reason, reading your poem i thought about it. Love the Pumpkings, especially their ''1979'' song. I was listening to some Shakuhachi (The Japanese Flute music) and in combination with it, it had a weird effect...haha

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

That's a wonderful song, about being a junkie, but still a wonderful song. Bradley Nowell died way .. read more
Ana B.

6 Years Ago

Yeah, i know what you mean.He has a very awesome voice, i also like the voice of the Arctic monkeys .. read more
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

I kinda forgot about the Artic Monkeys. I'm gonna have to reacquaint myself with them. I used to e.. read more
Excellent write,powerful message,dark and to the point.Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

You really need to put spaces between your punctuation Ron. It's kind of a give away.
Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

You're right about the spaces! I keep forgetting! Who's Ron?
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

A paranoid fantasy of mine... just ignore that.
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Too deep to dig and too dark with meanings!
The powerful thing it has is once if reading started eyes scroll down for more...
Grear read😊

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful, truthful and sadly dark. Yes they are out there doing their damndest to influence.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

It's is very sadly dark. Thanks for reading. Have a glorious day Chris.
Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Come back for a second read of this. Yes, even a week later it makes me think.

Chris
Eloquently put and expressed to perfection. Powerful, dramatic,dark and even scary.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Thank you Dee. Glad you enjoyed it.

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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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