Truth and Truthfulness

Truth and Truthfulness

A Poem by Davidgeo
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expectation defines meaning
with exception
'hey how are you?' is a greeting
not a question
like fake tits are just illusion
not deception

some lies are not collusion
just confusion
some lies induce delusion
for a reason

the truth and being truthful
are not mutually exclusive
it's the lie not in confusion
that's relationship pollution

© 2018 Davidgeo


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Interesting read, makes you think and ponder at times. Expand a little more so people understand your following and meanings like in some lies induce delusion for a reason. As that is open and you could think anything. Maybe just me being daft. And the ending " it's the lie" not in "confusion" that's a relationship pollution. That brough it all home for me. powerful and dramatic ending. Maybe not explaining myself great. Hope you follow. Good work and raw and drama filled.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Deleting comments is even weirder. I hope I didn't upset you.
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Munna vikram

4 Years Ago

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I love this poem, It's brilliant... I love the amazing words being used... I am in awe of this..

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

This was inspired by a very short book by a fellow named Sam Harris called "Lying". It's a pretty g.. read more
April Blue

6 Years Ago

Thank you for explaining further... I will have to look this book up...
This is very interesting! I do like it a lot. Nice writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting read, makes you think and ponder at times. Expand a little more so people understand your following and meanings like in some lies induce delusion for a reason. As that is open and you could think anything. Maybe just me being daft. And the ending " it's the lie" not in "confusion" that's a relationship pollution. That brough it all home for me. powerful and dramatic ending. Maybe not explaining myself great. Hope you follow. Good work and raw and drama filled.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Deleting comments is even weirder. I hope I didn't upset you.
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Munna vikram

4 Years Ago

Collect the free codes of roblox game here on this website this is an awesmoe for the player of robl.. read more
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Impressive.....some lies are not collusion just confusion!
Truth and truthfulnes....I often get confused in elaboration...however your one a good read now!😊


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Thanks Tahsin. I appreciate your appreciation.
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6 Years Ago

Hehe...wc😊!!

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Added on June 4, 2018
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Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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