unScientific Method

when memory remembers
patterns of survival
in the bush in the wild
it feeds it defends

it leads species to dominance

when memory remembers
moments in specific
all distorted and faulty

in the world in the modern
it leads species to confusion

why memory remembers

is not what we remember

but how we survive

in a world of competition

it leads by what works

all truth is irrelevant

as we logically know it

in the wild in the bush

today is always the gift

tomorrow always the wish

             no matter specifics

    it's all about instincts

Author's Note

Reviews

[Kay]

Great choice for the title and I really like the way you broke down the structure for this piece. It's a very interesting topic, had me rereading it a few times. Well written. =)

[Davidgeo]

I love making people have to re read my drivel. It means it's not horrible... or at least uniquely horrible.


Thanks for your review... I won't remember what it said but I will remember that is I liked it.

[Davidgeo]

(omit the "is" in that last sentence)